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1 20%
4 80%
Voters: 5.
3 days, don't vote for yourself

---That's what She Said---
by: eaglestalon101

Mommy, take me home right now
that clown is the least of my worries;
let worries entertain me instead.
Put dust on a dough and call it bread.
The slaves have gathered their fowls,
gripped tight by their claws-
flown west were dusk
takes it's rest;
held captive by morn.

Surely I shall be put to sleep
by the silence of the middle east
counting coconut yield
outside of Adapasari.
But when tomorrow comes
and the day after tomorrow goes
we'll all be back, nine till five.
Nul; strolling in the algebraic pattern.

by: Bleed Away

Foaming waves crash on the coast
as the gulls sing their evening lullabies
And off to the horizon a score of sailors
listen to the silent songs of the sea
an unforgettable enchanting eloquence
drifting away from existence

Indeed you could hear their final blows
before they take heed far from out yonder
Leaving their treasures behind
for months and sometimes years at a time
Little boys becoming men
and their little princes' having been married
missing the precious events of life
aye, the gold and jewels that
a man could never regain
"Surely I shall be put to sleep
by the silence of the middle east"
^that won my vote.

and even though I couldn't get all of it, black just seemed more mature, and less concerned with what it "should" sound like
I owe a ton of people critiques.

If you're one of them, please PM me.

I have trouble keeping track.
I just noticed a flaw in my piece....princes' is supposed to be princess'
Vivamus mea Lesbia, atque amemus,
rumoresque senum seueriorum
omnes unius aestimemus assis!