#1
Hey everyone.
This is one of the first songs I've written that I don't mind listening to, and I was wondering what you thought about it. Crit for crit?

Song is in my profile, titled "Restrained".
Cheers!
#3
I didn't mind listening to this either, I liked the quiet intro blasting into the main part of the song, but the intro was a little long. Didn't like how the electric guitar fades in but cuts off a moment before the drums and everything comes in. The later half of the song was good, nice job.

Link for mine is in sig