I am starting a hardcore punk project with grindcore influenced vocals and this is the first song I made up :0 I know jack about guitars, and take pride in my drum writing. This song is somewhat technical. I can't post a GP quite yet because I am having trouble with some guitar notes not showing up and the drumming isn't playing correct because I hand draw my notes in a sequencer for realism. This song is going to have yells, screams, and growls. Please crit. I am not a guitarist and I would love for people to tell me what could be better and your overall opinion on the song and its style.


By the way, the song isn't exactly done.
When They Pass.zip
Last edited by NeonTerror at Dec 3, 2008,