#1
Hey, I am new to song writing and I started something but it just seems so darn cheesy. You will not hurt my feelings at all if you suggest I drop the whole idea. Here is what I have so far. (Omigosh I am embarassed to even post it.)

In all my fantasies
You were always there with me.
I didn’t know who you were.
Of your name I wasn’t sure.
Now here you are before my eyes
With that smile that shines.
I can’t believe it’s true.
I just have to tell you.

You’re the one that I’ve been dreaming of.
You’re the one with who I fall in love.


That's all I have so far. And maybe I should just forget this whole song idea. It's so chessy! Help me be not so cheesy! LOL!