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Don't you dare move
Don't you dare struggle
You're bound, ensnared
They'll pull you under…
This ground is false
This sky is brittle
The water's dark
Uncertain, unclear
Your body needs more room
To keep the darkness in
You've fought for way too long
So carry onward
This current's strong
Do you feel it sinking in?
To make it on your own
Is short a miracle…


Going up against the creek
You wouldn't last a moment more
Going up against the creek
You won't repent everything


I hope you only beg forgiveness
I hope you only mean to change
I hope you only beg forgiveness
I hope you, change…


You're falling deeper
You've fallen in
You're falling deeper
You've fallen in…

You're falling out
Out of reach
You've fallen out
Out of … Reach!


Oh!


I see you float along face down
You'll never make it now
Self awareness growing dim
Need someone to pull you out?
You've struggled with everything
Now you're left all alone
You're up the creek and no paddle
No one to save you now
The cramps upon your side
Show signs of ignorance
You're flailing up against
A tide of shame
The blood that's in your veins
Starting to course cold
You let it all sink in
And now you're lost…


You're up the creek
With no… paddle
You're up the creek
With no… paddle


Going up against the creek
You wouldn't last a moment more
Going up against the creek
You won't repent everything


EDIT: If you only going to criticize my grammar, then don't even bother posting.
Last edited by 3rdActguitarist at Dec 3, 2008,
#2
Quote by 3rdActguitarist

Don't you dare No comma please. struggle

Your bound, ensnared
Your? YOUR?
By my own rules, I now officially hate you.


This sky is No comma please. brittle


I hope you No comma please. change…




YOUR!
MY BOUND, ENSNARED?
NO!
I'M BOUND, ENSNARED