#1
This is a song that i wrote some time ago
when i felt sh*t out of luck and really down
(i still do) i forgot the verses so im gonna rewrite
them on the spot. things in caps are screamed for
more effect!

My life is tearing at the seems
threatens to crash onto my shoulders
nothing is what it seems
IM GONNA BURN AND SMOLDER

as i grow older
i find new meaning of hell
its living here on earth
everytime i got up
I FELL

and

This is another kind of suicide (suicide)
one that eats you alive FROM THE INSIDE
the things you keep locked up
the sh*t you dont let out

that makes you want to SHOUT
to ANYONE ANYTHING
ANYONE ANYTHING
JUST SHOUT NOW

so many thing dont seem to go right
all that time spent alone
all those cold nights

and all these feelings burn inside me
pent up and locked down
and i cant LET THEM FREE

This is another kind of suicide (suicide)
one that eats you alive FROM THE INSIDE
the things you keep locked up
the sh*t you dont let out

that makes you want to SHOUT
to ANYONE ANYTHING
ANYONE ANYTHING
JUST SHOUT NOW

hope you like it, its from the heart, and it hurts.
p.s. im not new to song writing so give it your worst, critique wise!
Last edited by koolrockr99 at Dec 3, 2008,
#3
Its amazing, makes me remember the hard times in life. Very emotional and no need to change it. I think with some good music you could be a career musician.