#1
"My response to you" and "may"
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We really take our music seriously, our recording quality isnt pro but pretty good. Please give us some constructive feedback!! Crit for Crit!!
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#2
Ok, I checked out "My Response to You".

The good: The instrumentation was good, the song was good. I think that end is solid.

The "needs work": The Vocals. Two issues I find. One, it's a little pitchy at spots. Two, It doesn't sound like he's opening is mouth wide enough. Not joking. It sounds like he's relying on the resonance from his sinus cavity to let him know where he's at and because of that, he's almost mumbling. Bring the source down into the chest/diaphragm (it seems like I'm saying this a lot on this board) for better resonance/articulation.

C4C:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1013570
    #3
    IDK, it just sounded like your average alt rock that's out there.

    it's just...moody. soft. not like memorable love-ballad soft, but there's-no-hook-here soft. seriously, you guys need some vocal hooks. the songs just don't jump out at all. I mean, it's fine, but it could be better.
    #4
    Thanks guys, usually we get rave review with no criticism on here so it's nice to get some advice
    He came dancing across the water
    Cortez, cortez
    What a killer.
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    http://zoso.dmusic.com/ <--Check me out at