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With swords drawn sharp
And shields held bold
They stare along the port of the stern

Unaware of what happens next
they still have the courage inside

ready for battle
they're quick to defend
hope is never lost

as they get to the beach
their eyes shall beseech
the enemy prepared to fight

the words escaped them
their legs grew stiff
until one warrior yelled
(I need something to insert here)

they fought for their lives
they fought for their land
they fought for with pride
and won like men

That is all I have so far I am hoping to get some help on what should be changed. Any feedback would be nice.
Gear Wish list:

Gibson Custom Les Paul Left handed

ISP Decimator

Maxon OD808

Peavey 6505 Halfstack

Gear Fund: 0/6000