#1
Ok so these are the requirements. It has to have 2 metaphors or similes and have a rhyme scheme.

I am looking for a theme of either: the first day of summer, skateboarding, or playing guitar. I need serious replies, not just stupid pointless comments.

I have been trying for about an hour and a half and haven't come up with anything decent so I'm asking anyone for help. Preferably 10 lines or more, but if it is 8 i will still be greatful.
Thanks
#2
I play the guitar,
I'm not goin' far.
I play the drums,
I get all the mums.
I play the bass,
it's like I'm caught in a maze.
I play the banjo,
That's where I wanna go!
funkyducky


Icing happen when de puck come down, BANG, you know,
before de oder guys, nobody dere, you know.
My arm go comme ça, den de game stop den start up.

Quote by daytripper75
Get To Da Choppa!
Last edited by DirtyMakik at Dec 4, 2008,
#3
ABBACCAD

doit
Lord Gold feeds from your orifices and he wants to see you sweat.
Lord Gold probes you publicly and makes your pussy wet.
Now say his name.....
#4
You just have to jump in and start writing. Go with what you feel.
#5
Baited by Candy to a Van (in the Summertime)

The first day of summer,
Brian awakes with a grin.
The sun is smiling like a pedophile,
Guilt free without sin.
All the kiddies are playing,
in the Park don't you think?
But young Brian is in a van,
While the pedo's stroking his dink.
#6
Quote by MeltingWaxFace
Baited by Candy to a Van (in the Summertime)

The first day of summer,
Brian awakes with a grin.
The sun is smiling like a pedophile,
Guilt free without sin.
All the kiddies are playing,
in the Park don't you think?
But young Brian is in a van,
While the pedo's stroking his dink.



Yes this ones great, i think ill pass this in


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#7
Ask Mommy? (A Tale of Womanhood)

Young Vanessa is singing,
By the riverside, dreaming,
Of all the love and beauty,
And her immense caring meaning.

She feels an itch,
And a wetness, below,
Is this normal she asks,
While the blood drips down slow?

Her mother hears her crying,
So she asks what is wrong?
But Mommy I'm messy,
And the smell is so strong!

Don't worry young Vanessa,
In time you will grow,
Tits on your flat chest,
And some hair down below.
Last edited by MeltingWaxFace at Dec 4, 2008,
#8
Sittin around my house one Friday afternoon
My best friend came over and not a moment too soon
I hopped on my guitar and I started strummin like a riot
I looked at my buddy and I asked "Ya wanna try it?"

I threw him my guitar so he could get the feel
And he got caught on a groove like a fish on a reel
Now I know what your thinking, he probably wasnt good
But I swear to this day, he was playing like Clapton could


I donno man Im high.
#9
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Play this guitar bitch
Or else I'll kill you.
1996 Fender American Telecaster
Schecter Omen 6
VOX AC-15
Alvarez PF2005
1985 PROCO RAT II
BOSS DS-1, DD3, SD-1, TU-3, NS-2
Danelectro Overdrive
Jimi Hendrix Wah
EHX LPB-1
MXR Supercomp
#10
Quote by BitchBeGone420
Sittin around my house one Friday afternoon
My best friend came over and not a moment too soon
I hopped on my guitar and I started strummin like a riot
I looked at my buddy and I asked "Ya wanna try it?"

I threw him my guitar so he could get the feel
And he got caught on a groove like a fish on a reel
Now I know what your thinking, he probably wasnt good
But I swear to this day, he was playing like Clapton could


I donno man Im high.



wo. that was really good no joke. like an actual good poem, not just a manufactured one for an assignment. i already finished anyways but thanks.
#11
Quote by Sever_the_Skull
wo. that was really good no joke. like an actual good poem, not just a manufactured one for an assignment. i already finished anyways but thanks.



It sounds like Will Smith rap song ala Fresh Prince of Bel Air lol