#1
Really wantin to use this to finally come up with a first full song eventually, and it may not be extremely unique, as i am not an accomplished songwrite, haha...but lookin for any input maybe as to a direction you might think it could go songwise (just opinions i know it could go a lot of ways, and ultimately w/e way i choose, haha) Also maybe some changes for it if any. Thanks.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/shinedown98/

riff1

Thanks again, post song and i will return crits. This is a rough btw, don't know if repeating it that much without a variation would get a lil boring...
Last edited by shinedown98 at Dec 8, 2008,
#2
Quote by shinedown98
Really wantin to use this to finally come up with a first full song eventually, and it may not be extremely unique, as i am not an accomplished songwrite, haha...but lookin for any input maybe as to a direction you might think it could go songwise (just opinions i know it could go a lot of ways, and ultimately w/e way i choose, haha) Also maybe some changes for it if any. Thanks.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/shinedown98/

riff1

Thanks again, post song and i will return crits. This is a rough btw, don't know if repeating it that much without a variation would get a lil boring...

not really original like you said but it's still pretty rad
#3
yea i need to work on my originality, trying to kinda get out of my habits, and hopefully in that process i will find some diff stuff to do then my norm. Seems however "Original" is pretty tough to accomplish these days, in whatever genre, unless you have a real good understandin of theory, and/or played for YEARS to figure some sheit out. Thanks tho.
#4
I liked it man, try turning the volume of your overall mix up though, it was a little quiet, and originality is just a matter of listening to more music, eventually it just rubs off on you. Other than that nice work man!
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