There's my clip. It's not perfect in any way, but I'm proud of myself for being able to play it half decently now. My sweeps used to be absolutely atrocious. Been playing for a little over a year now.

Also, I'm looking for a better tone. If anybody can give me advice on how to adjust my current one, I'm up for suggestions.
"What are those wooden things? Chairs?"
"No, they are acoustic instruments."
"Acoustic? What's that? Oh you mean a grampa's guitar?"
"A grampa's guitar? That's for pussies and grampas. I think you know it."

Not a big fan of BTBAM and never heard the song but checked it after and rechecked your video.

It was good, not perfect like you said, improvements need to be done, but that was some awesome sweeping :P I'm still learning sweeps, maybe I'll learn that song :O

Anyways, C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=948340