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Is there a certain reason you don't have bass in there? Also, you have about 29 unused bars at the end, and if it was meant to finish at bar 50, it didn't really sound like it did.

In my opinion, the lead vocals high pitches were kind of hurting my ears. Maybe change it to a clarinet? That was the main problem I had while listening to it.

However, I really liked this tune. Besides a few small setbacks, I'd give this 8/10.