I actually liked the intro riff a bit because it gave me sort of a spacey vibe, pretty cool I think. I think that the pause around 40 seconds or so was a bit awkward and this could be a space used more for a drum or bass fill if you didn't want the guitar doing anything. The transition into the lead seemed a bit awkward to me, and the lead itself seems a bit random with that rhythm behind it. I think the lead section could be made a lot more interesting if the lead was rewritten a bit to flow slightly better and the rhythm, drums too, was changed to fit the lead better. I'd say you have some ideas to work with though.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1016967