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**Here is the finished version of this song. It's not a repost. I'm rather proud of it so let me know what you think!**

Real feeling,
He that watches the sun,
longing for more,
and recieving none


For darkness,
We fall into oblivion
for the heartless,
we give our all
Can man be so ashamed?
To hear what they have said
Can fear be so calm?
To quiet the cries of the dead

In darkness,
We ride for the light
In sadness,
we return the order
When does life end?
For it truly goes on
Who can say when?
We die looking for more

Freedom in thought,
We surrender the art
Returning but cold and broken
The truth that he sought,
To save our hearts
Finding that it had been stolen

Taking our thoughts,
surrender your arms
Your walls have been broken
The truth they forgot
That's crushing our hearts
We are truly fallen

Defy darkness,
ignore the protest
with true pride,
bring down the hordes
Is it only hope?
It speaks for itself
Does it dare resist?
It can prevail

Breathe darkness,
absorbing the hate
Bleed vengeance,
return from failure
Who else sees the end?
It can't only be me
Will I stand alone?
I will stand alone

Freedom in thought,
We surrender the art
Returning but cold and broken
The truth that he sought,
To save our hearts
Finding that it had been stolen

Taking our thoughts,
surrender your arms
Your walls have been broken
The truth they forgot
That's crushing our hearts
We are truly fallen

Screaming for our souls
Fighting for redemption
So as I will stand my own ground
Joining those who failed

Joining those that are fallen

Running for our lives
Envision what's been done
I will bring this upon myself
Defending those who failed

Joining those that are fallen

Wherever light is failing,
Whenever death is nearing,
However hope is screaming,

We are truly fallen
Blindfolds aside I'd probably still close my eyes

And try to feel a trembling fetal life inside
that shotgun barrel that's about to make me bleed

Like an ulcer in the stomach of the beast


Quote by Aurex
your sarcasam amuses me


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Thats really cool
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Quote by therealtater
In darkness,
We ride for the light


arent those dragonforce lyrics? anyway great song


Huh I don't think they are exactly,
however Dragonforce IS one of my bigger influences.

However I would not stoop to knowingly copy someone else's lyrics
Blindfolds aside I'd probably still close my eyes

And try to feel a trembling fetal life inside
that shotgun barrel that's about to make me bleed

Like an ulcer in the stomach of the beast


Quote by Aurex
your sarcasam amuses me


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