I'm pretty new to here and to recording
So I hope I'm at the right place to pick up good critics and advices
This one's is like an example of something that could make a song with my future band =p

So here it is... http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Pernarchich/music/all/play483707
The rest is written in the description

(Btw I've used Cubase SX, and Guitar Rig3 or Amplitube Metal)
umm its pretty good.. nothing special though. also your tone is a little muddy, but that could be from the recording..