#1
I just made a new version of a song idea I've been working on. I really like the ending, so bear the repetitiveness and enjoy the ending. Tell me what you think.

Click the link in the sig (Event Horizon) and it's the first song.
#2
Definitely would be a cool start to a song, just cut it shorter. The bends kind of got repetative. Maybe end the song with the same intro, except slow it down?
I loved the ambient stuff after, it was empty, but it has potential. maybe throw a lyric line or some acoustic guitar over that, or both.

If you can, can you crit my song?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1018440
Thanks!
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