#1
The feeling of a searing blade tearing your flesh
a dull screwdriver driven thru your chest
a blowtorch scorching your skin
liquid nitrogen sprayed in your eyes
then your skull smashed by a sledge
this is the beginning of...

Black Death
A Mortifying Urge
Black Death
Among The Disturbed
Black Death
The End Of Desire
Black Death
Set Them Afire

Diamond tipped drill bits jammed in your face
testicles smashed by use of a mace
killing them quick, a quiet disgrace
Watching them squirm As you Peel off their skin
letting out demons you hold from within
killing them countless, without worry for sin
This is the beginning of...

Black Death
A Mortifying Urge
Black Death
Among The Disturbed
Black Death
The End Of Desire
Black Death
Set Them Afire

Hands covered in blood
clothes soaked to the bone
watching **** flood
as the knife slams home
killing them all without worry or fret
killing until you dont feel upset
hearing their screams just eggs you on
thoughts of killing all but gone
burning them all so they know its you
they think your sick but they have no clue...

Black Death
A Mortifying Urge
Black Death
Among The Disturbed
Black Death
The End Of Desire
Black Death
Set Them Afire


Let me know what y'all think
#2
the black death is a sort of dani filth style scream while the underlying lines are a cannibal corpse-esque guttural
#4
Goddamn that was nasty haha. Very thrash/old school death sounding. Is that the style you were going for?
#5
I enjoyed verse two and its repetition, the rest I care little for.
#6
it actually was..... i love thrash and death metal so i got this notion in my head and wrote this and i ****ing loved it
#7
not really my style, but the written work was alright.
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