#1
i was happy once; i was just a child
when the cold rain still slipped away,
and i wasn't afraid of the worries
that stapled my mind to shame.
not saying it was easy then,
but my head was still sane;

it's wandering now
in the mud puddles.

i still got dirty back when i didn't care.
my hands still mucked things up,
but i didn't let it phase what i held golden.
so what did i hold golden?

all the things i can't remember.
from gold to grey, from gold to grey.

i held laughter once; i was just a kid
when my happiness still filled the air.
and i was so brave, the fears i have
were hidden from my tranquil brain.
not claiming i was not naive,
but my heart knew none of ignorance.

it's darkest now
from the icicles of pain.

i still got cold back when i didn't mind.
my insides still iced me up,
but i didn't let it freeze what i held golden.
so what did i hold golden?

all the things i can't remember.
from gold to grey, from gold to grey, gold to grey.
Last edited by radiocure at Dec 12, 2008,
#2
This was really good. A little depressing, but really good. I liked everything about this. Very nicely done. I didn't really find any errors. Great job. Keep up the good work.