That was really nice, i loved the chorus and the key changes.
The only thing that kind of bugged me was the ending. It ended abruptly, maybe you could hold that bent note until it drowns out... i don't know
oh yea, and the electric guitar was awesome throughout the song, it was kind of doing its own thing, and it fit perfectly!
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