#1
on my profile...

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Four+Symbols/


Quick demo... A very personal song expressing my feelings at the current. Props to anyone who can guess what it means.

I have 2 versions, one is acoustic, and one has drums bass, electric guitar etc. The latter one is VERY sloppy. Both are just a rough demos so I don't forget the idea -- I plan to spend the time to record a proper version of some sort.


Feel free to leave constructive crit. I will return the favor if you'd like.


Thanks.
Last edited by Four Symbols at Dec 13, 2008,
#2
nice song, nice chords, nice lyrics. Not trying to be offensive, but your singing kind of bothered me. I think you try a different approach to it. I enjoyed the ending solo, but the solo around 1:24 was a little cheesy and didn't fit the song. You are more talented than just speed picking 4 notes. Just my opinion.

Overall great job.
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ESP Eclipse II Vintage Black w/ EMG 60/81
ESP LTD EX-400 Black w/ EMG 60/81
ESP LTD EC-2005 Black w EMG 85/81


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Crate GLX1200 w/ 4x12 Slant CAB (only useful as a chromatic tuner)
Valveking 212
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#3
Quote by hellrazzer24
nice song, nice chords, nice lyrics. Not trying to be offensive, but your singing kind of bothered me. I think you try a different approach to it. I enjoyed the ending solo, but the solo around 1:24 was a little cheesy and didn't fit the song. You are more talented than just speed picking 4 notes. Just my opinion.

Overall great job.


I agree with him! Your voice sounded pretty dark. But I think it sounded better than my stuff.

c4c?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1021362
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2003 Fender MIM Strat
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60W All Tube Egnater Renegade Head and Cab.
#4
Quote by evortre
I agree with him! Your voice sounded pretty dark. But I think it sounded better than my stuff.

c4c?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1021362


its "meh" in my opinion. It has some timing issues and some feeling/presence issues that could be chalked up to recording flaws. Its an good idea, but I think you need more practice as a guitarist. Sounded sloppy to me. Keep on picking though.
Guitars:
ESP Eclipse II Vintage Black w/ EMG 60/81
ESP LTD EX-400 Black w/ EMG 60/81
ESP LTD EC-2005 Black w EMG 85/81


Amps:
Crate GLX1200 w/ 4x12 Slant CAB (only useful as a chromatic tuner)
Valveking 212
Dunlop Crybaby
Digitech RP100
#5
Quote by hellrazzer24
its "meh" in my opinion. It has some timing issues and some feeling/presence issues that could be chalked up to recording flaws. Its an good idea, but I think you need more practice as a guitarist. Sounded sloppy to me. Keep on picking though.

I agree there, but did he do vocals and guitar at same time? I wonder lol, cause if he did, he did decent..
EQUIPMENT:
Guitars:
2003 Fender MIM Strat
2008 Ibanez AEG20E A/E Cutaway
2011 Epiphone Les Paul Traditional Pro
Amps:
Epiphone Valve Jr. Halfstack BitMo Trio Modded
60W All Tube Egnater Renegade Head and Cab.
#6
The acoustic kind of bothered me, but the electric one was good, Your voice is much better fitted with the reverb/echo. The song all fit into place and sounded good, I understand it was rough and sloppy oh well, well done.