#1
maybe there's a better name? just wrote this.

a light, a light, a light;
burning hard into the night.
snow hitting cheeks uncovered.

our feet, our feet, our feet;
pressing shapes into the street.
lives once stood together.

this city's knocking us into the ground.
a building burning so pretty, pretty.
let our spirits fly,
while our hearts die
side by side.

a sign, a sign, a sign;
reading "open, come inside".
a bar filled with ways to hide.

a cry, a cry, a cry;
you've been trying best to fight.
i guess her voice drug you under-water.

this town is burning us into ashes.
a song on tape is all she left for you.
let her fade away
as she finds a way
from night to day.

this city's knocking us into the ground.
a building burning so pretty, pretty.
let our spirits fly,
while our hearts die
side by side.

let her fade away
as she finds a way
from night to day.
#3
You rhymed "Away" with "A Way". I had to point that out. Maybe change it to:

let her fade away
she needs to find her way
from night to day.
"The Campaign turned ugly, when two politicians kissed the same baby." - Bruce McCulloch

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#4
Quote by bam_pontius
You rhymed "Away" with "A Way". I had to point that out. Maybe change it to:

let her fade away
she needs to find her way
from night to day.

i realised that, but i think it sounds better let her fade away as she finds a way from night to day.
#5
Quote by radiocure
maybe there's a better name? just wrote this.

a light, a light, a light;
burning hard into the night.
edit: flame swallowed by the moonlight.

our feet, our feet, our feet;
pressing shapes into the street.
lives once stood together.

this city's knocking us into the ground.
a building burning so pretty, pretty.
let our spirits fly,
while our hearts die
side by side.

a sign, a sign, a sign;
reading "open, come inside".
a bar filled with ways to hide.

a cry, a cry, a cry;
you've been trying best to fight.
i guess her voice drug you under-water.

this town is burning us into ashes.
a song on tape is all she left for you.
let her fade away
as she finds a way
from night to day.

this city's knocking us into the ground.
a building burning so pretty, pretty.
let our spirits fly,
while our hearts die
side by side.

let her fade away
as she finds a way
from night to day.

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