#1
We used to be so good
Used to be so perfect
Two shy people wondering around just giving effect
We never knew each other, but thoughts aside
You’re the one who made me feel electrified

As time goes on those memories will never fade
Me, you, and the whole charade
Remember me; remember what i used to be
Keep me close and one day you'll see
That me and you were meant to be

But slowly we drift apart
Never to see, what we could be
I was just left there, with a broken heart
And the thought of you and me

As time goes on those memories will never fade
Me, you, and the whole charade
Remember me; remember what i used to be
Keep me close and one day you'll see
That me and you were meant to be

Back together the spark still there
I feel it relieving me from my despair
Take me now, hold me tight
Because you’re the only person on my mind tonight


Well here It Is It Seems More Like A Poem Then A Song To me
Let me Know What You Think
Thanks In Advance
#2
I really love it, proably hits me because i just lost someone i love recently and wish more than anything they'd come back and reading that actually had a strong effect, i especially like the Back together part, i really like those lines especially
#3
Electrified is a bit of an odd word to use and it threw me off.
Also broken heart is very very cliched.
I really want to like this but I cant grab any structure or events, the rhymes worked well and it flowed great, but the obvious love of the person made it a little over powering.


If you have any free time I've written some lyrics too, Thanks