#1
Puzzles,
Their really ****ing hard.
I don't like them very much,
But I do them when I'm bored.

Like a TV screen,
Or a magazine.
Puzzles are pictures.
If you know what I mean.

Look at the cover,
And leave it on the table.
Then your dog gets at it,
And you have to start all over.

It's like "**** Dog!"
How the hell did you get on the table?
You ate my lunch,
I was saving that for when I was
Hungry.

Hungry.

Like a TV screen,
Or a magazine.
Puzzles are pictures,
If you know what I mean.

Like a TV screen.

Like a magazine.

1,2,3,4.

Ten years pass.
I finished the ****ing puzzle.
And my dog got at it.
And I had to start all over.

It's like "**** Dog!"
How the hell did you get on the table?
You ate my lunch,
I was saving that for when I was
Hungry.
BulletzAreScene
#3
well it is certainly entertaining! I get a very delicate frustration feel... almost chaotic except for


Like a TV screen,
Or a magazine.
Puzzles are pictures.
If you know what I mean.

and

Like a TV screen.

Like a magazine.

1,2,3,4.

these come of very pop punk and it doesn't quite mesh with the rest of it... not sure what you were going for, but it all seems to contradict it self. I'd say i like the less catchy stuff.
Stay quiet...
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#4
First stanza, Second line: They're.
Puh-leeez.

Anyway, this was exciting and entertaining for the simple fact that it's different.

Lovely.
#5
very entertaining! keep it up.
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#7
haha, thanks everyone,
to clearify, its a rather fast song with
a pop-punky feel, alot like Blink-182.
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#9
As everyone else, I liked it (By the way it's "they're" not "their") except for the swearing in it. I feel it sort of takes away a quality that was in the rest of the piece. The 1,2,3,4 sort of seems out of place to me, and I think the piece could benefit without it. Other than that, great job.
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#10
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As everyone else, I liked it (By the way it's "they're" not "their") except for the swearing in it. I feel it sort of takes away a quality that was in the rest of the piece. The 1,2,3,4 sort of seems out of place to me, and I think the piece could benefit without it. Other than that, great job.


yeah, you'd need to hear the song, theres actually a guitar solo
after that part.
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