#2
wow. that was ****ing awesome. it reminded me a little bit of death. the only complaint was that the treble is way too high, and on the riff at 0:33 you cant really tell whats going on because of it. turn the treb down and pull up the mids.

overall, it was pretty damn awesome though.
#3
Thanks man, that the kinda thing I was looking for in a response is the mixing. This was all written a few hours ago, so W.I.P, none the less thanks for the comment man I appreciate it.