#2
i can kinda see where some of it is going, and some parts are pretty good, but definitely a lot of kinda sloppy parts that make listening to it harder than it should be

i'd say just try to re-record some of the songs and clean up the timing, sounds like it could go somewhere
#3
thanks for the comments. Fair enough.
there are a couple of parts where I actually stuffed up, and I only did one take of all the songs.

As for timing though, changes in timing are deliberate, so I couldnt exactly click track it. excluding the bits which are clearly errors, timing-wise it is pretty close to how I want it. it is good to get feedback and hear peoples opinions to see where I could go though. cheers.