#1
this is one i scribbled down saturday night(my first attempt at lyrics rather than poetry)but it was saturday night and well it was late.
ive got two kind of musical arrangements in my mind one includes 'strangers walking by' and one doesnt.

Driving down this city road
In my isolation
Doors locked
Aircon on
Tapping my frustration

Strangers walking by

Red lights pound my mind
Ruling my progression
A place to be
Running late
Time is my obsession

Strangers walking by

CHORUS(lift beat)

Blank faces all around
No one is real
There is no sound
Just a darkness inside....Me

Sitting in a stagnant line
Wishing a solution
Road blocked
No way out
Music no salvation

Strangers walking by

Blue tooth in my ear
Screaming my intension
The same again
As yesterday
Where is my destination

strangers walking by

CHORUS(upbeat)

Blank faces all around
No one is real
There is no sound
Just the darkness inside .....me

Drving back this city road
In my isolation
doors locked
Aircon off
Tapping my frustration

Strangers passing by

Red lights pound my mind
Ruling my progression
The day is gone
Targets missed
Home is my obsession

Strangers walking by

CHORUS(upbeat)

Blank faces all around
No one is real
There is no sound
Just a darkness inside .....me


thanks for looking critisism is no problem , how else do we learn
#2
i really do like it with a beat that would be amazing i imagine it heavy metal not sure if it is but thats how i imagine it and i love it :P
#3
Quote by Craigy_boii2008
i really do like it with a beat that would be amazing i imagine it heavy metal not sure if it is but thats how i imagine it and i love it :P


cheers just wrote another im posting it know.