#1
This is another song I have written the lyrics for so far, and its about this girl who i went out with for months and then she cheated on me and we broke up. recently she has had trouble with her homelife and with the police and school so she ran away, and its been a while since shes left so these lyrics are based the feelings i have of her leaving.
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Where are you now, and I thought about you the other day
Are you sorry yet, no I never did let go of the pain
Are you running still, you seem to find trouble every where you turn
Are you trying now, to forget my face and the life you have left behind
Well, some people say your a hore and good riddance
but, I knew someone more that maybe you didn't
You're a friend I lost, and I'll always regret it
and maybe a first love, I'll never forget it
As you stumble through the darkest parts of life, I offer my hand, but you turn away

Why does God allow this to happen
You're 15 young and you're already finished
I can't let go, please come home, and I really think you should know
My porch lights going to be on all night, so please come home if you get in a fight
The time is right, my hopes are bright
Come on baby quit running away

So are you lying now, you really did have me fooled for a while
Are you cheating now, on some guy like you did to me
Are you crying now, life gets hard when things come back to get you
Are you missing me, because I sure as hell am missing you
Nobodies perfect we're all proof of it
We life in a world of lies and deceit
You're no differnt, and I'm no different
I don't condone your actions, but my conscience won't let you go
You stumble through the darkest parts of live I offered my hand, but you turned away

Why does God allow this to happen
You're 15 young, and you're already finished
I can't let go, please come home, and I really think you should know
My porch lights going to be on all night, so please come home if you get in a fight
The time is right, my hopes are bright
Come on baby quit running away

I can't, stand that
I won't, let you go
Can you, hear me
I would, like to know
Are you, running
Please, just come home
I miss you, I miss you, I miss you
Please come home
Last edited by zchavez09 at Dec 16, 2008,
#3
i really like this but i dont understand at the beggining you say good riddance then you say come home like you change your mind ? but even still very powerfull great job
#4
when i say 'well some people say your a hore and good riddance' im saying that other people are saying that about her but thank you guys for the crit ill give you guys some later i have to go now