#1
Im at a crossroads again
should I jump or just dive in
I can't pretend that you dont mater to me
Im feeling sideways again
cuz you bring me to my knees
and I dont know where to go from here

cuz if I stay I might get hurt
but if I leave I'll just hurt worse

everywhere is no where if your not there with me
and everywhere I go just seems empty.

Im letting go of everything i've ever known
so take my hand
we'll make it trough
lets take this chance
start something new.

everywhere is no where if your not there with me
and everywhere i go just seems empty.
#2
Too many cliches, but the structure is interesting. Just try and make it sound a bit less emo kid.
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#3
Quote by shadow__666
Too many cliches, but the structure is interesting. Just try and make it sound a bit less emo kid.

He's right you know, I mean if you would have given me the first two lines, I could have pretty much told you what you were going to say. It's too cliche, and it's too predictable...