Considering I don't like that stuff, it was good.

Vocals could use a bit of work to be more consistent but apart from that, +1 to you.
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Squier Precision Bass Special in Antique Burst (LH)
Rotosound Swing 66s, 45-105

On slapping on a bass:
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pretend its a woman
i have no helpful advice