#1
(Song. much only posting cause i cant find my notebook and i dont want people looking through my microsoft word.)

Winter drives and fireflies,
icy roads and summertime,
got a different mood for every season,
lord I got a different woman for every reason im alive
but this time, lord
i know its you
if you'd just tell me the truth.

cause we know

that you could be my mona lisa,
ill paint a smile on your face,
just cover me in that warm embrace
that i know you know too well
you dont trust me
darling i can tell
well we got half a pack of ciggarrettes
and all night to burn it down
you and me in the back of my truck
and some counting crows spinning round and round.

when you look at me like that
and ask do ya make me nervous,
well baby yes ya do
but im not going to be sharing that
kind of information with you.

but just know

that you could be my mona lisa,
ill paint a smile on your face,
just cover me in that warm embrace
that i know you know too well
you dont trust me
darling i can tell
well we got half a pack of ciggarrettes
and all night to burn it down
you and me in the back of my truck
and some counting crows spinning round and round.

If you would be my mona lisa,
i would be your loverboy,
ooooh just let me please ya.
ill paint a smile on your face,
you'll cover me in that warm embrace
that i know you know too well
yea,
you just know me to well.
#2
Been a while since I critiqued anything on here but that was fantastic, it was very real and original and I loved the painting a smile on someones face image. Well done.