Tis in my profile, called 'The "Hero".'
The recording ain't great and it's rather quiet, but I'd really appreciate it if you could give me some thoughts. I'm not looking for any really detailed crit, as there are both guitar and vocal mistakes throughout, but just some general comments on the structuring and feel of the song.
Yus, I will crit back if you want.


ps. if you're feeling industrious, the older song "kicking stones" on my profile is another vocal/guitar track that I wouldn't mind you looking at. The recording is A LOT better as it was done in a decent amateur studio at school. c4c on that, too.
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