#1
Mind sets

This means nothing to me
'Cause you are nothing to me
And it means nothing to me
Unlike you once did

'Cause you could have been number one
If you only found the time
And you could have ruled the universe
If you had the chance
Unlike you once did

You could have been number one
And you could have ruled the whole world
And we could have had so much fun
But you blew it away
Like you once did

You're still nothing to me
And this is nothing to me
And you don't know what you've done
But I'll give you a clue
Ive won

*sung harmonically with guitar with words at end of each line sung to ring out, even adding some vocal vibrato*
#3
Quote by LoneStar88

This means nothing to me
'Cause you are nothing to me
And it means nothing to me
Unlike you once did

I like the idea going on here, but I would mess around with it. The third line is throwing me off a little.

'Cause you could have been number one
If you only found the time
And you could have ruled the universe
If you had the chance
Unlike you once did

"cause'" in the 1st line and "and" in the 3rd seem a little unnecessary. Other then that I like it.

You could have been number one
And you could have ruled the whole world
And we could have had so much fun
But you blew it away
Like you once did

I would redo the 1st line cause its the same as the last verse.

You're still nothing to me
And this is nothing to me
And you don't know what you've done
But I'll give you a clue
Ive won

I like this verse. A great ending. Repetition is good too.



Overall I like it. Very emotional and straight forward. Good work!

C4C? "All that mattered" in my comment.
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Don't fret man.