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i was playing guitar and just writing down what i was singing and made a few ajustments and this is what came up yes i rhyme no i cant help it yes i suck no i wont stop writing :P


So you see that i was always missing
never seen, never given hope

what is love, what is pain
oh its all the same to me
never loved never free
what is life when its all missing
when the only reason you have
is live for the family

the thought of us move aside
the thought of you locked in my mind
if you wernt my freind id kill you
end your life just like you've ended mine

the one you want is never really there
the one you need is the cause of your dispair
they take your life they take your dreams
they leave you wasted
with just your insanity

now tell me you dont love me
tell me you dont need me
all you want is for me to leavee
all i am is just a memory
that part of you
that drove me to insanity
That drove me to!!!!!

take back what was mine
all you say is "it'll be better in time"
time dont stop the feeling
time's not the remedy
shoot me down
to save me from this insanity

the one you want is never really there
the one you need is the cause of your dispair
they take your life they take your dreams
they leave you wasted
with just your insanity

just remember, you were the death of me
Last edited by Craigy_boii2008 at Dec 18, 2008,
#2
Quote by Craigy_boii2008
i was playing guitar and just writing down what i was singing and made a few ajustments and this is what came up yes i rhyme no i cant help it yes i suck no i wont stop writing :P


So you see that i was always missing
never seen, never given hope

what is love, what is pain
oh its all the same to me
never loved never free
what is life when its all missing
when the only reason you have
is live for the family

the thought of us move aside
the thought of you locked in my mind
if you wernt my freind id kill you
end your life just like you've ended mine

the one you want is never really there
the one you need is the cause of your dispair
they take your life they take your dreams
they leave you wasted
with just your insanity

now tell me you dont love me
tell me you dont need me
all you want is for me to leavee
all i am is just a memory
that part of you
that drove me to insanity
That drove me to!!!!!

take back what was mine
all you say is "it'll be better in time"
time dont stop the feeling
time's not the remedy
shoot me down
to save me from this insanity

the one you want is never really there
the one you need is the cause of your dispair
they take your life they take your dreams
they leave you wasted
with just your insanity

just remember, you were the death of me


if youve got a tune then what could be wrong.would be nice to here what you can write a bit more upbeat.happy....or a bit of a laugh....something stupid....try it i'll do the same and see what we get
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