#1
Here's a little song i wrote, when i was sitting alone in school for like one hour and waiting for my sister.

Please, if you find any verbal faults, write in comment. Swedish is my original language, so my english isn't perfect.

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Thanks.


Verse 1
Such a loneliness as mine
It shouldn't exist

Gazing upon an empty chine
No one is there, to care

Great emptiness crushing my head
the feeling is mortal

Sometimes make me wish i was dead

pre. chorus:
But now im fed up
of being lonely
wanting someone (for) myself
to hold in my arms
to protect

chorus:
So alone
watching the whole day burn away

So alone
feeling my inside decay

So alone
don't want to be it anymore

So alone
don't want to feel it anymore

Verse 2
Emptiness leaking inside of me
destroying whats left

All that you can see
just an empty shell

Watching the sky float away
feeling growing inside me

Hearing a whispering say
pre. chorus:
Don't be lonely anymore
you don't have to
because now I'm here
for you to hold
for you to protect

chorus:
Not alone
watching the whole day burn away

Not alone
something building inside me

Not alone
not alone anymore

Not alone
never felt like this before


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Once again, thanks
#4
no bumping. reported.
Quote by ottoavist

i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror