This is a song about richard ramirez. It is only the instruments and a drum machine. No bass. Anyway, tell me what you think about it. And I know I shouldn't ask but can someone give me advice on writing rhythm riffs.

http://musicnation.com/music/scithe Then play the song.
Anyway if you like the song email me silasthompson175@gmail.com and tell me what you think. Or say what you don't like.