#1
ok this is a song i wrote like a month ago, i like most of it but if any can help me try to make it better, id appreciate it. crit 4 crit. constructive crits only please
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song of the dead.zip
#2
i'm guessing you were trying to experiment with some different time signatures which worked at some points but was a little too inconsistent with the 4/4 - 5/4 - 4/4 - 12/8 switch. also there were a lot of notes in the solo/guitar break that sounded off key. i think if you tweaked those and worked on some of the parts that sound off this would be really good. nice original idea though.

i have one ptab posted in this forum if you check my profile... give it a look if you're up for it

sorry, here's the link
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1026001
Last edited by JChrist521 at Dec 21, 2008,