#1
ok so i wasnt sure where to put this... and i think im in the right spot. just lookin for some feedback.. good or bad.


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you said that youd like to hear a story
but i tell you that my stories are all boring
you said that youd like to sing along
but somehow my songs always turn out wrong

i pick a tune out on the guitar
strum some chords ive learned from near and far
think of you and hum my melody
cause when im with you i could write a symphony

i pull characters from my brain
and i write a plot that makes you think that im insane
tell a tale that you just cant believe
and then you say that im the greatest you have ever seen

you drop a smile when i mention your name
and now you got me thinking that this whole things just a game
you listen close and hope that its all true
and you wait for me to say that im in love with you.


i feel like the songs unfinished.. it has no real ending. ive been too lazy to pick-out an outro.
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#2
it was pretty good. i like the guitar in it. comment on my song
When I buy my wife, at first she cook good, her vagine worked well, she strong on plow, but three years later when she was fifteen, she receive hair on her chest, her voice become deep, "BORAT, BORAT", and her vagine hang like sleeve of wizard
#3
thanks...

do you mind tellin me a lil more detail...
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#4
.... id REALLY REALLY like some more feedback here.

this my first recording.. and im still real nervous, insecure... whatever.
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