#1
(PREVERSE)
FOR YOU TO BE SO SELF-RIGHTOUS
IS UTTERLY AN EXCUSE
YOUR EGOMANIACAL EXISTANCE
IS DUE TO YOUR ABUSE
(PRECHORUS)
YOU ARE NOT ALONE
YOU ARE NOT THE ONLY ONE
TO FACE SUCH CONSEQUENCES
JUST TAKE A LOOK AROUND YOU
Don't take another punch
Don't take another swear
Just throw that **** back in their face
Don't take another punch
Don't take another swear
Just throw that **** back in their face
(PREVERSE)
TAKE ANOTHER LOOK IN THE MIRROR
NOT ANOTHER PILL
YOU LOOK LIKE ALL OF US ON THE INSIDE
YOU SUFFERED SO MUCH **** IT MAKES YOU ILL
(PRECHORUS)
YOU ARE NOT ALONE
YOU ARE NOT THE ONLY ONE
TO FACE SUCH CONSEQUENCES
JUST TAKE A LOOK AROUND YOU
Don't take another punch
Don't take another swear
Just throw that **** back in their face
Don't take another punch
Don't take another swear
Just throw that **** back in their face
(BRIDGE A)
(BRIDGE B)
BREAKDOWN)
(SOLO)
(BRIDGE A)
(BRIDGE C)
(PRECORUS)
YOU ARE NOT ALONE
YOU ARE NOT THE ONLY ONE
TO FACE SUCH CONSEQUENCES
JUST TAKE A LOOK AROUND YOU
Don't take another punch
Don't take another swear
Just throw that **** back in their face
Don't take another punch
Don't take another swear
Just throw that **** back in their face
(BRIDGE A- OUT)

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#2
hey man sorry for being a downer but you're only allowed to post 1 piece a day, two per week to help keep the forum clean and fair.

Not trying to be a prick but be sure to check the rules and faq and all that at the top of the forum so your threads don't get closed


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Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
#3
I don't get it, are you like, shouting the words in caps?
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#4
when I read that i thought 'Throwdown'.... maybe even hatebreed? (lol). maybe throw in another verse or 2.