#1
Floating on a whisper,
Or hurling through at pace,
Subjectively objective,
Just dreaming out in space,
coz I gave up on circadium Rhythm,
Away from it I spun, finding Plutonian vision,
I'm not on a mission, and its not my religion,
I'll tell you how to avoid gravity if you'll listen,
Your suspended on a law, mathmatical for sure,
Divide up all the numbers and you'll make the answer raw,
Express it all in zero's and you'll soon find the plot,
Send yourself to orbit and lose that weight that you've got,
Reasons as ideas,
And answers as forethought,
You can defy this logic,
If you divide it all by nought.

Chorus...

Oh space cadet, waste cadet,
What was the point?
Oh I forget...

(Repeat).


Then a guitar solo for 3 billion lightyears
Once We Were Anarchists
#3
Well... What would you like me to say?

Kind of neat, but...?
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#5
Wrong thread
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Well I don't know about solos but how about that Smoke on the Water riff. It's like...impossible.


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#6
Quote by floppypick
Well... What would you like me to say?

Kind of neat, but...?


Ha, Yeh that'll do

If you wanna assess it as a serious literary piece I wouldn't mind, but honestly, just feedback about its merit as a contribution to the songwriting forum (which clearly is the right forum for this) would be great.
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#7
Space Cadet... WinPinball?
funkyducky


Icing happen when de puck come down, BANG, you know,
before de oder guys, nobody dere, you know.
My arm go comme ça, den de game stop den start up.

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#8
Ha no, I've posted this in the pit... my bad (wondered why I'd got such a good response already!)
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#9
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Ha no, I've posted this in the pit... my bad (wondered why I'd got such a good response already!)


Chorus could be improved..

Just doesn't seem like something I'd really remember, it just wouldn't stick.
Though I'd like to hear how it would go before I say too much.
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