#1
I wrote this song about a year ago, and it reminds me of lettuce.
I wrote it after listening to Temple of the King by Rainbow so its "inspired" by that.
The volumes of all the different instruments are a bit messed up in midi but you'll get the idea. Crit for crit.
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#2
Ok, Good work, The rainbow atmosphere it's ok
The Acoustic track is very good, but the electric part can be better in some points, it needs a blackmore feeling, bluesy, melodic and often slow
Listen to the "ariel" solo (Stranger in us all)
Good work, 8/10

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#3
i dont know what you were aiming for (not what im really into), but i thought it was quite relaxing. i wasn't watching the tab play for most of it, i was just listening. it sounded pretty nice to me.

i didn't notice anything bad sticking out of it, but that might not mean much because i dont participate in the genre its in so i can't really scrutinize it all that much.