#1
Hey guys, kinda new to writing music and this is my first post here. Just wanted to get some criticism and input. Thanks.

Threads of Life

The scarlet glows
on our hands it shows
blood which no one knows
is earth's unending flow.

The scarlet glows
the spots on our hands grow
blood which ever shows
that's the way it goes.

I know this will be hard my friend
this could be the end
there's a rising trend.
Now I'm struggling to understand
why earth still holds man
despite his bloody hands.

We disgrace our ground
this scarlet turns to brown
there won't be a sound
as we all fall down.

We disgrace our ground
the tables turn around
will there be a sound
as the earth falls down.

The threads of life are stretching thin
I feel it in my skin
a growl up from within.
And now times will be hard my friend
cause this looks like the end
the ground begins to bend

The threads of life are stretching thin.
I feel it in my skin.
And now times will be hard my friend
cause this looks like the end.
The threads of life are stretching thin.
I feel it in my skin.
These times are getting hard my friend.
The ground begins to bend.
#2
Nice, but the title was used by Shadows Fall, its their title track and the name of their latest album. lol

I think its kool though. Keep it up dood.
#3
haha yeah i know that, i'm actually a fan of their's. any suggestions for a better title?
#4
The Scarlet Hand as a title, maybe?
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