I write music with my friend Drew (alternative Hip-Hop, he sings, I write music)... anyways we just finished recording our first songs, and i posted them in my MP3 in my UG profile.

This is both of our first attempts at recording. The drums are fake, only the layered guitars are real & the lyrics were written like 10 minutes before we recorded.

They're my first songs and before I get back downstairs to finish other songs, hopefully I could get some criticism.

I am not singing either. But if I could get some criticism on the vocals as well, I suppose it would be just as helpful.