#1
Hello all! I'm relatively new to composing anything, or throwing together something that hits a certain emotion, but I think I did it finally....this is my second composition, but I want to know what everyone else thinks of it.

Thanks for any critique!

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/valennic/music/

It's the one labeled "rain"

Thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time to listen.

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Washburn WG587
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#2
I liked it. Very relaxing. Calmed me down after a long day.

(Just to add that screaming demonstration was ****ing badass)
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#3


Thanks, I was aiming for a rainy day type of feeling, kinda relaxing, but a bit tense at the same time.

(Thanks, I've gotten better since then though )

My things:
Bowes SLx7
Washburn WG587
Washburn X40Pro
Washburn X50
Washburn HM24
Washburn WR150
Laguna LE200s
Arietta Acoustic
First Act
Valveking 112
VHT Deliverance

#4
Haha, I suck at using guitar pro, so props on getting everything sounding the way you actually want it to. It's a very nice easy listening piece. I've had a long day also, and enjoyed it thoroughly. That little part that was kind of dissonant but not really kind of freaked me out. You should learn to play that fast part on guitar (would sound awesome with distortion). Overall I liked it, didn't end too soon, and didn't drag on.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=17786871#post17786871

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#5
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Haha, I suck at using guitar pro, so props on getting everything sounding the way you actually want it to. It's a very nice easy listening piece. I've had a long day also, and enjoyed it thoroughly. That little part that was kind of dissonant but not really kind of freaked me out. You should learn to play that fast part on guitar (would sound awesome with distortion). Overall I liked it, didn't end too soon, and didn't drag on.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=17786871#post17786871


Thanks .

The first dissonant section? I intended it to be a bit creepy thanks.

I would love to, it's some intense sweeping. Thanks for the critique

Of course, I'll give it a listen and post my comments in your thread.

My things:
Bowes SLx7
Washburn WG587
Washburn X40Pro
Washburn X50
Washburn HM24
Washburn WR150
Laguna LE200s
Arietta Acoustic
First Act
Valveking 112
VHT Deliverance