#2
Sounds really. It's got a good bassline going along with it too. Quality isn't the best, but that's okay, I can hear fine. It's pretty good, but at 1:50 that's where it started really getting my attention. That was a pretty beast solo. You have some good riffs in there too. I wish it had more of an ending though, it seemed like it just kind of stopped. But other than that it was great! 8/10

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1028256
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#3
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Sounds really. It's got a good bassline going along with it too. Quality isn't the best, but that's okay, I can hear fine. It's pretty good, but at 1:50 that's where it started really getting my attention. That was a pretty beast solo. You have some good riffs in there too. I wish it had more of an ending though, it seemed like it just kind of stopped. But other than that it was great! 8/10

c4c?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1028256
or
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1028252



thanks for the crit, i'll give yours a listen.

i know this song sounds like it has no intro or outro, its because its the same drum beat all the way through, i need a real drummer! lol. and i still want to come up with another part or to for this song. just a ruff draft for now
#4
It still sounds great! Those riffs sound really well thought out. And you said this in another topic of mine, but me and my friend were actually thinking of making a super mario metal lol .
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#5
Hey man crittin you back

Like you said we aren't into the same music, but like someone told me on these forums "talent transcends genre." What a good quote. This is beastly stuff, sounds good, good tone and cool riffs. I would love to listen to this if I was running or working out or something. keep it up.
#6
thanks for listening guys, i'd like to get some feedback on the solo part. i just made that up on the spot.
#7
Thanks for the crit! Its a cool song, nice chugging riffs, and really classic drums. It reminds me of Kreator, really grimy sounding- I think the quality you recorded it as helps that. As for the solo part, I like it but I think that it would stand out more if you used a more kick-heavy drum beat for that part- not necessarily a blast beat, but something different from the rest of the song.
#8
I dont know about Jamz being God but hes close! Dude I like the rhythm patternes you had going on. I didnt really listen to anything else. Those were killer in my eyes!
#9
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Thanks for the crit! Its a cool song, nice chugging riffs, and really classic drums. It reminds me of Kreator, really grimy sounding- I think the quality you recorded it as helps that. As for the solo part, I like it but I think that it would stand out more if you used a more kick-heavy drum beat for that part- not necessarily a blast beat, but something different from the rest of the song.



the drums are just looped, i don't actually know how to make a real drum track. thanks for the crit.
#10
Hey man, cheers for the crit, iv taken a while to get back to ya, but im just listen to ur song, Hell the riffs or friggin awesome. Very well structered, For the solo, only section that gets i think a bit messy is the 'pull of' section but the rest of it sounds friggin awesome. When i say a bit messy i mean very small, i couldnt do better myself, The lead guitar leadin into the solo for me is great. My 2 cents.
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