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Concept song I've been working on for my band. The rhythm is a little middle eastern sounding, hence the name.

Death metal vox;
Fractured fate in his hands
Father's sins Undone
Beast seeks retribution
From the sacred one

This six-edged plethora
of hate, detest, and guild
writhing, slithering free
He is reduced to null

Clean vox;
I am you
your prison
your pain
your restriction

I offer you
your freedom
your pleasure
your will

Take me under
I'll do as you command
My body
My thoughts
My Mind

Surrendered unto you
I no longer feel
I fear I long for you
Unto which I desire

(Break, interlude, solo, whatever?)

Comments, criticizmzmzmz!?
Last edited by Shazazmic at Dec 24, 2008,