a good attempt... but it wasnt brilliant. the sweeping bit was a bit out of time (i think... its hard to tell cus of the actual song playing aswell)

also, the harmony bit after the sweepin, add some vibrato. will sound a lot better.
i think a bend or too near the begining (on the 5th fret) was a little out... but no bigie...

keep practising and youll have soon