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Please comment, I would really like to get some crit!

Verse 1.
Catch me 'cause i'm ready now
Don't tell me it's too late
If I've missed my chance
I'll die inside
It can no longer wait

I've got to love you
I've got to hold you


You're holding on to words
That I can't get you to share
If only you would say it loud
This silence I can't bear
I've turned into that creepy guy
Who's walking pass your house
Looking through your windows
'till the lights've been turned out

I've got to love you
I've got to hold you


Chorous
I know I felt you feel it too
But now you feel it for someone else
Give me a sign to get you out of my head
I know you feel it for someone else
Can't you see what he is doing
Is what I've adviced him too
Can't you see he can't think for himself
He is not deserving you

If it wasn't for me
He wouldn't be in your arms
right where I wanna be


Verse 2.
I'll catch you if you're ready now
'Cause i know it's not too late
If we miss this chance
We'll die inside
It can no longer wait

We've got to hold on
We've got to hold on


What about the day
You were holding my hand
And the day we went bathing
And then rested in the sand
It seems like ages ago
Maybe just pictures of my mind?
Though I know I'll treat you perfect
And he'll just treat you fine

Chorous
That day I know I felt you feel it too
But now you feel it for someone else
Give me a sign to get you out of my head
I know you feel it for someone else
Can't you see what he is doing
Is what I've adviced him too
Can't you see he can't think for himself
He is not deserving you
Quote by zadzior
Sir, Awesome stuff. You have my respect!
Quote by neon-black
aw i love your song! sell it n' it would deffo be a smash!
Quote by veggiederek
this is great. you've got the words!
Quote by kiaraiswicked
... Wauw... It really paints a picture and leaves the rest up to the imagination!
Last edited by TheKermal at Dec 26, 2008,