i like this alot. id go in and re-mix all the tones. they are kinda hairy and are wayyy to sharp. also, this song needs more bass end. theres to much treble all over the song and the midrange and bass is pretty transparent. in the sound specttrum..it interferes with the strings. overall though..its reallly cool. ifyou wouldnt mind man, could you check out my song "hopeless" i just finished it and im looking for some feedback as well. b ut overall man..cheers on an awesome song. its got great melodies.