Hey...the title pretty much suggests it all. All you do is put a link or type in a song or story that you've made and then people can comment on it either on UG or the site the link directs to. I'll start:


This is a little short "suspense" story:
idk how well this would work, because this is what is done in the Original recordings thread, but good idea none the less.
Well, actually, this would probably be best suited for the songwriting and lyrics forum, unless you are posting links to pure compositions and are asking for critiques about song-writing skill and NOT recording skill or lyrical skill.

MT is more for musical writing, whereas the songwriting forum is more for lyrics and the riffs forum for recording skills. Here we talk about melodies and chord progressions, there they talk about feelings and *occasionally* writing lyrics or how expensive your equipment is and which vst's you managed to find.

But so far, from reading a couple, I think you need to work on your meter and flow a bit. The number of syllables in each line seems very erratic and the meter seems to be all over the place. Perhaps it was on purpose, but otherwise these two factors would make writing a melody to that damn hard (but still completely possible).
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[U]        |/     .-.              [/U]
[U]       /|_     `-’       |      [/U]
[U]      //| \      |       |      [/U]
[U]     | \|_ |     |     .-|      [/U]
      *-|-*    (_)     `-’