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I've been writing for a while, I have a good amount of songs written down, some completed, others lie in a heap. But I like this one. Was just sitting in my room, listening to the static, when I came up with this.

Crying all alone, in this bed you've sewn
Wishing I was here
Tears of emptiness, won't stop, will this end?
The lion shrinks to size
You're alone--no one but yourself
Here's a phone--try to call for help

When the static consumes the room
Everything is cool
When the static consumes the room
It will be too soon
When the static controls the room

Eyelids heavy now, no choice but to fall
It's safer on the ground
A sleepful yawn you make, it's time for us to break
Nowhere, you'll be found

When the static consumes the room
Everything is cool
When the static consumes the room
It will be too soon
When the static controls the room

A different stance you take--define the choices that you make
Beware the storm you've made
You're feeling so betrayed
Do not be afraid

When the static consumes the room
Everything is cool
When the static consumes the room
It will be too soon
When the static controls the room
When the static controls the room
When the static controls...
You

One of my favorite songs I've written. Please tell me what you think, constructive criticism is welcomed.